This week's writing challenge was "write a text thread between two people." Follow this link to see what my dad came up with. I wrote a short story called "Mom." I hope you enjoy.
Mom
6 years
ago
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Hey,
sweetie! Good luck on your math test. You got this. -Mom
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Omg mom, u
realize u don’t have to sign your texts, right?
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I just don’t
want you to forget about me now that we can talk through our phones!
-Mom
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U r such a
dork
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Anyways,
I have to get back to work, and you have a test to be studying for. I love
you so much! -Mom
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Love you too
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5 years ago
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Can I sleep
over at Kenzie’s tonight?
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Are you done
your homework yet? -Mom
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Uhhhhhh…
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Just as I
suspected, LOL. You can stay over as long as you finish up your schoolwork
this weekend. -Mom
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Did u seriously just say lol?
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4 years ago
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Hey, I hope you have a great day. Sorry I wasn’t home to make your
lunch this morning. -Mom
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It’s fine
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I love you. -Mom
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Love u too
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3 years ago
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Where are you? -Mom
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I’m with my
friends rn
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Will you be back for dinner? -Mom
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Jeez, relax.
I’ll come home when we’re done hanging out lmao
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I know, I just want to know how many I’m cooking for tonight.
Sorry! -Mom
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K well idk what to tell you
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2 years ago
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Hey, sweetie. I just wanted to apologize about yesterday. I hope
you can forgive me. -Mom
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I seriously
don’t want to talk about it
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That’s okay. But I hope you know I never intended to embarrass
you in front of your friends like that. -Mom
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Oh, you didn’t MEAN to humiliate
me? Well that makes everything soooo much better
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I know you’re upset. I wish things had gone differently. -Mom
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Yeah, me too
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Do you want me to leave work early this afternoon? I can grab
takeout on the way home and we can have a picnic at the lake like we used to.
-Mom
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So you can
suck up and get me to forget about the whole thing? Yeah, as appealing as
that sounds I think I’ll pass
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And you can
stop signing your texts. It’s annoying af
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Sorry, honey.
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I love you.
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1 year ago
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Hi mom. Ummm, idrk where to
start. My therapist told me to try writing you a letter. It kinda reminded me
of how you used to sign each of your texts as if you were sealing them in
their own little envelopes, so I thought I would send a text instead. I don’t
really know how it’s going to help though. Nothing helps.
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It’s been a year since… well you
know. Dad’s not doing too great and, I mean, who could blame him? I was
supposed to go to Queens for MedSci next year but I’m gonna stay home for
another year. I don’t want to leave Dad alone just yet.
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Uhhh lol nevermind this was a
stupid idea
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11 months ago
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Hey
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I miss you
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10 months
ago
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I’m sorry
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9 months ago
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Please come back
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8 months ago
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Why did the universe take you
away from me? Is this some kind of sick joke? Or a punishment?
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Who did this
to me? How could they be so cruel? Why did you leave me?
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Why?
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7 months ago
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If only I had known it would be
our last conversation. I wish I could take it all back.
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You were never “annoying af,”
Mom. Never.
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Maybe if I had let you come home
early that night, everything would be different. Maybe we would have eaten
takeout and fed the ducks our leftover crusts, and laid down in the grass and
looked for shapes in the clouds, and maybe your last meal wouldn’t have been
a watered-down cup of coffee from work, and maybe you would have still been
here.
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Maybe if I wasn’t such an
unforgiving brat you would have still been here
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I hope you knew that I loved you
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Why didn’t I tell you I loved you?
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I’m so stupid
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I’M SO STUPID
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6 months ago
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I can’t do it anymore
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I’m so alone
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1 month
ago
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Hi again, mom. So… I’m still
working with my therapist but things are going a lot better. I got a job as a
waitress b/c I’m staying home with Dad for another year. I don’t really think
university was the right path for me anyways.
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So yeah, I guess what I wanted to
say is thank you. Thank you for everything you‘ve done for me.
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I’m sorry I didn’t say it at the
time and I hope it’s not too late…
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I love you
too.
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Rogers
error 127. Unable to send or
receive messages. This SIM card has
been disabled due to 12 consecutive
months of inactivity.
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Wow... laughter and tears for me.... powerful!
ReplyDeleteWOW! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSo glad it’s fiction...your Mom is indispensable.